Personal Recount writing.

Personal Recount Writing

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Make a copy of the template and write a recount of your most exciting holiday activity. Save your writing to your writing folder. After conferencing with the teacher, upload your work to your blog.

Read other students’ recounts on blogs and make positive, thoughtful and helpful comments please.

Title:Tread Lightly Caravan

Orientation: who, what, where?Room 7 Mrs George,Mrs Atuahiva,Kate and Kelly.Knowledge in the school hall and the Tread Lightly Caravan.To learn how to save tree’s and how not to pollute the air when you travel to school and back.

Events: what happened?Room 7 went to visit the Tread  Lightly Caravan. First.....We got introduced to Kate and Kelly.We had a little whole class session and asked and answered a few question’s like when you brush your teeth and you leave the water on and don’t forget to turn the tap off each person has wasted upto a litre of water. Then we worked out how many litres we would waste as a class and as a school. It shocked most of to learn that more than 180 litres could be wasted each day.   Then..... Then we got split into 6 groups for the 6 activities.Which were the Magnified Insects,Pedal Power,Geckos and vine’s,Tread Lightly Caravan,E-waste and Travel log. My group started at the E-waste in my group there was Tauola,Aarmione,Salelei and Mangila.We started with Kelly doing the E-waste there was heaps of electronic devices like phones, computers and other items. Next..... We went around to every activity applicable in the event and  all of them were so interesting the power bike was my favourite where you have to share your strengths to boil the jug so that the teachers can have a coffee because the teachers were so desperate.The teachers’ were having fun as well as the kids were because Mrs George and Mrs Atuahiva had a glimpse and was happy as a monkey. Finally.....Well at the end it was all worth it all the scientific effects to the little insects in the caravan known as the magnifier was so cool and the Geckos and vines were so cool and also the power bike my favourite again was so cool,the travel log was so interesting and knowledgeable to everyone in room 7.It was a pleasure for everyone who attends Glenbrae School to have this expirience to knowledge alot of things about bugs,isects,power bikes and E-waste also the Geckos and vines.We ended the session with a overview about our day today and a very amazing Thank you from ne of our students in room 7 Nunia.We all enjoyed our day today and then we head back to class for somemore learning.

Conclusion: I thought that........ It was so fun with Kate and Kelly the Power bike,Travel log,Magnifier and the Gecko’s and vines.Me Mrs George,Mrs Atuahiva,Kate,Kelly and Room 7 was so pleased to be partly invited to the tread lightly caravan on Monday 19th of May 2013.  By Te puawai

feelings and thoughts   actions   descriptions   details   what do you think? It was so cool because of the geckos and vines, that game was a huge board game with any amounts of players.